Verto flicked his ear as two bright flashes of gold span around the small watery pond. One across the surface of the water and the other under it. He edged closer, watching the cool liquid for any more of the intriguingly bright lights until his paws almost touched the dark blue water. His mother owl watched him silently from the trees as Verto Stared in amazment the glittering light under the water next to the exact copy of himself, he didnt notice its source, a small glowing bug hovering near his ear...
this is when Verto first meets fire his 'lightening bug'
helped me abit, she told me to give a little more of the story so i put the owl in! THANK YOU! lady assasin!
SO a little bit of information about verto here
He hatched from a barn owl egg as his first form, (the one in the picture above) and his first change (he is a shape shifter) was into a barn owl but he prefers his orrigional form better.
______________Right, well i have been working on this on and off al day. ive got this far BUT
this is when i need..
it all looksokay ( i think) BUT what can i do to make it better and WHAT DO I PUT IN THE BACKGROUND!
please any ideas will be usefull!